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I'm writing a funeral . . .

However, due to certain biological constraints that prevent him from actually setting foot on hallowed ground, my main character/first-person narrator is unable to attend.

I'm writing an implied funeral . . .

Revision is awesome.
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Haha. More angst for Mackie. Hahahah.
Mackie is like this: :(

But I am like this: :)
As it should be. :D
I am sending Miss Emily to help:

I felt a Funeral, in my Brain,
And Mourners to and fro
Kept treading – treading – till it seemed
That Sense was breaking through –

And when they all were seated,
A Service, like a Drum –
Kept beating – beating – till I thought
My Mind was going numb –

And then I heard them lift a Box
And creak across my Soul
With those same Boots of Lead, again,
Then Space – began to toll,

As all the Heavens were a Bell,
And Being, but an Ear,
And I, and Silence, some strange Race
Wrecked, solitary, here –

And then a Plank in Reason, broke,
And I dropped down, and down –
And hit a World, at every plunge,
And Finished knowing – then –


ooh, cool! I love Miss Emily at the best of times, but this stanza is dynamite:

As all the Heavens were a Bell,
And Being, but an Ear,
And I, and Silence, some strange Race
Wrecked, solitary, here –
Hi. I've been networking and marketing myself outside of the most obvious places, and surprisingly, or not, I'm not always welcomed on hallowed ground either. I don't burst into flames or anything, but I think they'd like me to. That would be cool! Maybe?

Happy writing.
Thanks, Simon!
Is this for Tate's sister? Interesting...
Exactly! The time-line has . . . adjusted.
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